I.D.K MY B.F.F JILL
For that simple line im going to rate this high.
Author Comments
*LE GASP!* OK, this took way too long to finish, because I tried to cram in every idea I had since last May at once. This month the KRAP team reports on an unusual lawsuit, a suspicious new Disney World attraction, and a huge development in women's cross-country.
Be sure to look for the Easter eggs at the end! No, not the dumb one, the good one.
Oh - and that thing about Google is based on a months-old rumor; I have no idea if it's relevant anymore or not. But since when have local news teams cared about *facts*?
1/5
ausome animation crap idea and storyline thums down 2 whoeva wrote this crap
Nice
I like it a lot. I especially liked the Epcot ride. That one made me lol.
"Well..."
It was a good idea. Advice toward the Voice Crew, in a telecaster/news reporter scene they have a certain amount of time to cover everything on their set list. Try and run the sentences together, there were too many pauses in between topics. Pauses in a newscast setting should be a rare but dramatic thing, like when the camera went out, that was perfect. Ambiance should be in the background not on the same level of volume as the voices, play around with those until you get the best result.
teh-octan responds:
That's probably the most useful advice I've ever gotten on one of these; thanks!
Didn't like it
It didn't keep me entertained. The jokes weren't funny and it was just unappealing.
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2.31 / 5.00
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- Feb 1, 2009
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- Comedy - Original