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The Experiment is trying to ecsape the prison he was trapped in. Now this is only a mini, so dont expect it to be long.
Practice more, sync sounds more, make sure it flows correctly, instead of choppily, read my other reviews on your flashes, these things are all the same, 5 minute rush jobs that take no effort.
Please, take some time on your work and don't make so much parts, you should join them all together instead. This is stupid.
w-wow... That was...
w-wow... That was a fucking discrace to madness, don't animate if you do not know how to, fuck... Take your tiem to make it smooth, and check the frame rate.
You need proper hand placement, more smoothness, longer, and the FPS is incorrect (you need a little higher and smoother, then it will be good). I suggest watching tutorials and trying out many different ways of animating until you find the perfect way for you (everyone uses different animating ways).
Well, you tried. I hope you get better!
Guys This site is for people Which want show Their flash. Most of them are noob, but if we give them a good word, they will made a better animation.
7/10 and 3/5
Really short could have been a lot longer, that is for sure.
A short film about a park bench
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