This was my and my friend's project for our English 9 class. I did all of the animation, she helped with the script and did most of the voices. The only male voice in this is the first/last line, and even that is pitch-changed.
This is my first submission to Newgrounds, ha. Not a very good representation of me, since I didn't have that much time to work on it and my partner put in a lot of ideas that I wouldn't have done myself. I promise I'll try to do better in the future!
They didnt have me make a movie for Eng 9!
I like how you modernized it, but you only had a small part of the play, and you could've used more material...cause this wasnt a very monumental part of Romeo and Juliet...you made it funny though...i lol'd
Thanks Jake. And that's what the honors kids had to do. We had to each pick only one or two scenes, and this is what we got. :3
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Well, it would have been better if someone else did the voices of the friend and cousin. Also I think it would have been much better if you would have used Benvolio and Mercutio instead of those names you made up. I like the way you put the script into medern terms though! Like "Ohh, emo lover boy" or "you might actually get some" LOL.
Ha, yeah. I realised that our voices sounded absolutely horrible, but only when it was too late to go back and change it, OTL. Thanks for watching/commenting!
Coolio.
Good stuff I thinks. That art is ok, it works, except More movement is needed. Or any movements really. Voices, meh, they're fine. And the humour was alright considering it was school project. Very promising, keep it up.
Thanks for commenting!
I wanted to do a lot more movement, but once I realised that I would barely be able to finish it, I opted to have a full video with awkward mouth/body movements (if any) rather than a half-done video with better quality.