Its... ok

not your best one so far.

hahaha :D

i liked the idea and the background but a little short

OMFG

THANKS TO ME THIS PASSED JUDGEMENT :) I FEEL SPECIAL, AND EVERYONE ELSE, FOR MY FIRST EXPERIMENTAL ANIMATION I COULDNT MAKE BETTER, BUT TOO SHORT, GOOD JOB, KEEP IT UP

Welcome to Newgrounds

Well, this is your first flash. Good job. I'm hoping you move up from this experiment to something bigger and better.

Advice: You don't have to upload your experiments. I can tell you made this very quickly. You should spend more time on these things, and if you're not the artistic type, you can just make a sprite flash (using pictures and characters from video games). Explore Newgrounds. There are craploads of great flashes that you can learn from, including tutorials.

Not bad

For a first flash. The animation was done very well. Good job.