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okay, but REALLY creepy.
Author Comments
I dedicate my first submission to Drathir for poking me for so long till I caved in, and of course to YOU NEWGROUNDS oh such fun we have had, as we all corrupt the youth with evermore crude and vulgar penis jokes, mixed in with some metal gear references. I hope you enjoy my Cartoon
Regards
DelinGoldhammer
First Flash
I liked the um, fighting was it? Maybe you should have kept this a little longer and lengthened the movie, added more audio, and put some sort of meaning to it being submitted to Newgrounds. Good flash for what it lasted though I'll give you that. ****
DelinGoldhammer responds:
Thankyou 1337Bob for your thoughts. I wasnt really trying to dazzle the audience I merely was doing a short clean cut animation for my first submission.
Regards
DelinGoldhammer
Cock Joke.
The graphics could have been cleaned up and maybe a little bit of a story before the punchline (which was good), but other than that this is a pretty solid start. Keep it up!
not bad
it was pretty good, especially for your first submission
your art style was very "newspaper comic"-y and i liked it
the ending kind of ruined it for me though........