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Jan 4, 2009 | 2:28 AM EST

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Author Comments

I dedicate my first submission to Drathir for poking me for so long till I caved in, and of course to YOU NEWGROUNDS oh such fun we have had, as we all corrupt the youth with evermore crude and vulgar penis jokes, mixed in with some metal gear references. I hope you enjoy my Cartoon

Regards
DelinGoldhammer

Reviews


mrawesomedudemrawesomedude

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

ah!!!!!!!!!

okay, but REALLY creepy.



1337Bob1337Bob

Rated 2 / 5 stars

First Flash

I liked the um, fighting was it? Maybe you should have kept this a little longer and lengthened the movie, added more audio, and put some sort of meaning to it being submitted to Newgrounds. Good flash for what it lasted though I'll give you that. ****


DelinGoldhammer responds:

Thankyou 1337Bob for your thoughts. I wasnt really trying to dazzle the audience I merely was doing a short clean cut animation for my first submission.

Regards
DelinGoldhammer


CyrisJonesCyrisJones

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Kyaaaa!

For your first submission this is pretty good! The rock paper scissors PENIS ATTACK made me laugh. Only think I would have changed a little is maybe adding some oriental background music, and maybe not a white background during the R.P.S. All in all very good though! make another!


DelinGoldhammer responds:

Thankyou CyrisJones for your encouragement, I really appreciate the support. Although I do agree with you that more music would have been good Im still having technical difficulties with my Music Keyboard, I am a little hesitant when it comes to taking other peoples music. So hopefully when I am able to get it operational my projects will be more entertaining

Thankyou for the review
Regards
DelinGoldhammer


RhyfelRhyfel

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Cock Joke.

The graphics could have been cleaned up and maybe a little bit of a story before the punchline (which was good), but other than that this is a pretty solid start. Keep it up!



somaxsomax

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

not bad

it was pretty good, especially for your first submission
your art style was very "newspaper comic"-y and i liked it
the ending kind of ruined it for me though........