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Dec 31, 2008 | 12:41 PM EST
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2nd episode of the series Rat. I've put so much into this animation, from writing the music, to designing and painting the backgrounds and of course the animation too. I thought I'd never see the day I finally uploaded this to NG.

I really hope you enjoy it!

Edit: Awsome Daily First! Thanks very much for the reviews and votes every one c:

Reviews


ToastEatsYouToastEatsYou

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Kind of short.

Maybe if it were longer, it would be a bit better. Also, the figure of your character is a little disproportional. Never-the-less I'm giving this cartoon a ten because it definitely deserves it.



gamecubebiblegamecubebible

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great

This is great work. I loved the dark "feel" to it. As if it was not surely stable and could crumble anytime anywhere... Anyways.. I couldn't help but notice a few things which I think could be better...

In the next episode I would love to see a boost on the actual storyline.. right now it is a bit unclear to me of who is the main character and who is the villain..

You need to work on your characters faces.. The eyes of your main character looked odd at some points and the chin of the character at some places, filled the entire face leaving a little space for the mouth, eyes and nose to run over..

Also, a little tip on how to actually make it looks better at times, and not look like it was drawn once and then not redrawn again, is to zoom in on the drawing and then redraw the lines till they fit.. this might be a bit time consuming but it definitely helps!

All in all.. 9/10 A great deal of work, although it does have a few minor flaws, therefore I give it a big 9 ..

Keep up the good work :)


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ViciousLlamaBeast400ViciousLlamaBeast400

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Perfect.

-For some reason it wont let me rate 204?-
I love you morbid/dark animation styles, also, most flash submissions dont have a storyline (yours dose). I also really enjoyed the storyline! Most flash submissions with storylines i dont even enjoy cuz they're so crappy xD but anyway, it was really easy to follow and I enjoyed it very much. I think this series can go a long way. Keep it up.



YotianYotian

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

IT had a great promise in it.

but didnt deliver it quite so well.

The animation was great (hats off)
But few things kept bugging me, to be more precise the story telling, the voice wasnt the best possible unless you crank up the volume so high the paintings start falling off. secondly the text is way too granulating(like in old movies) and the font is one of the worse ever used for story telling.

othervise a good animation.


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Ryku650Ryku650

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

A great storyline

Not really much of a great storyline... I was kidding with the title. But I can already see that it's going to be great. Good job..