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Max Hurt

December 26, 2008 –
January 3, 2010
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

This is not going to be continued.

Reviews

That one can progress through the movie by pressing the little pink button.

OK, I have some citicism to start out. Some of the use of colors shows a lack of expertise. For example in the 'loading' screen when they enter the memory machine. Too many colors, too clashing. Try using a color wheel to get complementary colors, it'll help your flash look more professional.
Sometimes, your perspective is really messed up. In the beginning, try making the desk a bit shorter top to bottom and have Josey's feet on the carpet, rather than on the front of the desk; it makes the desk look flat when you have Josey actually standing on it. Also, in the scene where Max blows away the last guy, you can see the inside of the barrel of the gun in front of the guys head, it should be impossible to see the inside (the holes) from that angle.
Finally, the writing is sorta kiddish, it's like 'this happens, and then this happens, and then this happens.' That's ok, you're prolly young, so there's nothing wrong with writing like you're young. But if you look at some comics, you'll see that the characters kind of are who they are and they just happen to intersect lives, rather than having a main character with things happening to him and people coming into his life for no real reason. No doubt you'll flesh that out in later episodes.
That's pretty much all I have to say about this really. It does have some plot and action, and the dialogue is alright, I lol'd a little when he said that thing about being a hero. Not too bad, dawg.

A compelling story, and some good animation during the combat (sorry, but the animation at the rest of the movie was... different). I hope to see part 2 soon.

Good story line...I'm looking forward to the next part! I really dig the animation with the shadow characters, and I had no problem progressing through the story. Overall great job - Keep it up!

but you need a better animator

The animation is pretty bad, but (and I'm not sure if it's the drugs) the story's pretty good! Dude, keep it coming :D

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3.00 / 5.00