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it was nice and fluid, so good job, gave me a chuckle.
the sound needs a lot of improvement (although i still dont think i could do as good) its funny the animation was smooth and jerk free (thats a first in a quick stick flash!) but it desperately needs to be longer. but you certainly have talent
Well this could use some improving, voices for one, and some improved character details maybe a better plot, and more detail in the backrounds aswell
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above
Funny but needs more
I guess it's okay but the volume was too loud and it wasn't really that clear what he was losing
Not bad for 13
You obviously have a good grasp on FBF, and some good body movements.
A very smooth animation.
You have potential. Just keep at it, and maybe try some bigger projects. Maybe even move on the some full body stuff in the future.
The sound effects were pretty lame though.
both a try. It will help a lot.
yeah. i was about to upload it and was like "oh noes! i forgot to add sound!" so i recorded that all in one take in about 20 seconds.
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