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Its my first flash animation, do as many constructive critics as you want but please dont be too hard.
Its black and white because its original and...because the colors where to much for me LOL.
Ok well, I hope you all enjoy it ^^
the first thing that ruined this was the "OWNED" flashed across the screen at the first kill by Snake. Snakes voice was bad, but a good effort none the less. I like your style, continue to grow with it.
Hmm, Good for a first
It was fairly good... But i do agree with everyone on
frame by frame was a bit slow
the owned and lol's were not necessary
But all in all, GREAT JOB!
Im also looking for voice opportunities. So if you need a voice i'm ready.
Thanks man. Yeah there are some things to improve, and those are some.
And ok, I'll tell you if need a voice, wich I probably will.
Next time will be much better.
i like thatt one owned
the lolololoo wasn't really necessary good spoof
wasn't too bad
maybe a few more FPS would be good. great use of sound effects though
A nice standar little moive, I really loved all the line drawn stuff if you would have colored it I would have had hated it. Alsothe ending could have been better.
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