good for first time.....
nice voicing. Get a louder recorder though
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my first use of words in a flash. please don't be a compete dick and oh yeah turn your speakers way up!
lol?....
ok, so it had a funny punch line (vegetarian zombie)
but......short.
if u could have done something funny with the third zombie, it would have been funnier.
Hmm...
I know you said dont be a dick, but seriously... that sucked fat sweaty ball-sack.
Lol
Lol, I love the random bit when the 3rd zombie comes in.. Might I add, if you plan on making another just a note you could possibly add more blood spurting from the guys head.
!WOWO!
How about making it longer, and make it at least interesting.
