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hey guys bare with me now this is my first ever flash created.
I expect a low rating because its my first.
So enjoy (I hope)
BTW: If you have any suggestions on ways to make it better and some advice PLZ TELL ME!
Edit: Fixed Pre-loader
Being generous here...
Normally, for something of this quality I would of just given a lower score, but this is your first flash so I don't want to discourage you. But Newgrounds isn't a place to just practice your Flash skills, so next time try and make something that will challenge you and entertain us.
On a side note, the animation was good so you may have a future here on Newgrounds. Good job.
Ty I am Actually working on One now. Im having help from my freind which actually makes flash games.
A Kinetic KaBOOM!
Nice captured energy! I agree with a below reviewer; STICK FIGURES. Give the lines more anthropomorphic personality and it could go a long way. Keep on keepin' on.
I like the music, the animation is pretty good, sort of like the simple line series, but it started right away without using the play button.
>.< my preloader is messed up! Argh
I will give it a 7 because it looked really cool but it wa really short and it seems that you just use newgrounds to test your flash movies out. Trust me this is not the place. But I can see that you would do really nice making stick figure movies. Just a tip.
Thx for the coolness lol i didnt try to test it out I just wanted it uploaded.
Hmmm... Stick figure movies lol.
Ill give it a try.
I like giving generous scores...
You should probably make sure your Newgrounds preloader, is in the 1st Frame.
And, you just need to keep practicing and you'll make something wonderful anytime now!
Yea something went wrong there I dont know what
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