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Nov 30, 2008 | 10:13 AM EST

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Author Comments

I am 13 and this is my first Flash animation ever, but hopefully it's at least somewhat worth watching. It's short because I got lazy....nyah.

I apologize for the huge file size...this is about the smallest I could figure out how to make it.

Also on DeviantArt: http://7airgoddess3.devia



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Pretty Good For Your First

Your artwork and animation were both quite superb. The sound was superb as well, it blended quite nicely with the artwork. However the only thing I'm not quite sure of is the story, perhaps like drawing a butterfly it's an exploration of your imagination. All in all really good for your first.

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Superb Sound
*Superb Story

|| Bad Points ||


Rated 5 / 5 stars

nice :D

great animation, and i was quite surprised by the music you have chosen. but it wasn't wrong either, probably exactly what you wanted to express.
and not a bad start for a first flash, if i might add :)

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Very well done! I like the originality! Keep up the good work!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


interesting idea. nice animation to follow through with it.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


The Great: This is so amazing for a first flash. It is even decent for an experienced flash artist. You have great potential, and I await seeing you in the top 50 every time you submit.
The Not-so-great: A couple of shape tweens really didn't fit, and some shapes could be more defined, but who cares, it was GREAT!!!

All in all: Keep it up. You already have more skill than pretty much 80% of the people here.

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