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A journey on the train when my girlfriend left me
it looks like
there was not so muh entertainment.
Will be good when you learn how to introduce plots and characters better.
Good luck until then.
It LOOKs like...
We are about to dive into the insanity of a man during a dream while aboard a train, or was that just the twist I ruined? This story though has so many possibilities in terms of direction. Is the girlfriend really over him or did she die? Was she kidnapped? What happened? While the to be continued was sort of a cliched cliffhanger it did leave it vague enough to bring us in for number two.
I find this as a very impressive creation and will wait to see it bud into either a beautiful flower or a disgusting weed, it all depends on you now.
great work into detail by the way. the story is already drawing me in even though it has barely begun, keep up the good work.
Good animation (the slight movement of the head looking outside was very nice), the light broken heart story, the subtle sadness and the fantasy that ensued... good music as well... promising stuff...
Chances are,or could have been,or even will be,that you're style is of pure genius,but for now,I can only give you but seven for the great animation and the hope the storyline will be good in the end of the line.
Awesome choice of music,Youre flash is unique in all ways
ASTEROID HURLING TOWARDS EARTH!!!
tasty crunch of yummy cookie crumble
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