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Nov 16, 2008 | 8:21 AM EST
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A journey on the train when my girlfriend left me

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ninjajesus420ninjajesus420

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars November 22, 2008

it looks like

there was not so muh entertainment.

Will be good when you learn how to introduce plots and characters better.

Good luck until then.



DeathcomesxDeathcomesx

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 22, 2008

It LOOKs like...

We are about to dive into the insanity of a man during a dream while aboard a train, or was that just the twist I ruined? This story though has so many possibilities in terms of direction. Is the girlfriend really over him or did she die? Was she kidnapped? What happened? While the to be continued was sort of a cliched cliffhanger it did leave it vague enough to bring us in for number two.
I find this as a very impressive creation and will wait to see it bud into either a beautiful flower or a disgusting weed, it all depends on you now.



PhantomTechPhantomTech

Rated 5 / 5 stars November 22, 2008

interesting...

great work into detail by the way. the story is already drawing me in even though it has barely begun, keep up the good work.



CaveiraCaveira

Rated 4 / 5 stars November 22, 2008

Nice story

Good animation (the slight movement of the head looking outside was very nice), the light broken heart story, the subtle sadness and the fantasy that ensued... good music as well... promising stuff...



FallenDawnFallenDawn

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 21, 2008

Develop

Chances are,or could have been,or even will be,that you're style is of pure genius,but for now,I can only give you but seven for the great animation and the hope the storyline will be good in the end of the line.

Awesome choice of music,Youre flash is unique in all ways