what the heck i diddnt get that at all i got confused all the way through it

you ripped this whole thing off and whats bowser doing in here i thought the movie was supposed to be about mario and luigi fighting each other

I'm sorry to say but, no. This is not a proper enough clone of Alvin-Earthworm's work. And yeah, it's obvious where you got most of the ideas here. Let's hope your comment about you becoming much better since you made it is true... and that you've become more original too...

But that's about where it ends, any it's all well and good that you've gotten better since making this however this does seem like something that could use a major overhaul at some point.

It's got some serious potential, but the storyline needs to be fleshed out and the pacing seriously modified.

I've seen stuff on Newgrounds that utterly sucks, this just needs a revisit and it can be great.

the animation was top notch, but it is a rip of smbz. also the plot sortof forces itself onto viewers, one minute there in the mushroom kingdom, then its on fire, then they go to a different planet. it is all unexplained. so fix that. otherwize good. sound and animation kept me form a 0