nice. but get aids or cancer and die lol jk.
lot better than my first one.and for a first flash your art is pretty darn good. nice work keep it up.
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This is like my first Flash Animation,so its not the best you`ve ever seen and I'm sure some of you will tell me to get AIDS and/or cancer and DIE, but for those of you who are older than 5, please leave a "Constructive" comment.
Its alright for a first timer
Your characters' hands look like punching bags, that could be like a trade mark or something for you. Your characters need more facial expressions though and some background music would be nice. But overall, not bad! Looking forward to your next work!
good...first...
well, for your first one, it's pretty good, you just need to make the voices louder and work a bit more on the animation.
Alright
Hey, it wqas good for a first attempt. Need more frame by frame animation though, or at least more decent tweening. Hope for an improvement on the next one.
You will work on a new project one, right? LOL
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