You ROCK

You rock MERCIER

Good for a first :)

It needed sound, music and more time on it.
I liked it though, it was admiring.
^_^

It was really good

For your first try and the amount of time you put in. I like how you pulled off some story telling without sound but sound really helps alot. Try it with your next submission, in fact, add some sound to this and resubmit. itd be cool :)

Wonderful...

for your first flash.

good on ya mate!

first flash? I'm impressed :D, especially in the fact that you spent so muhc time on it. keep it rollin