Hrmm...
The only thing I found scary was wondering if that little girl had to live in all that clutter or if it was a set. Get her a pillowcase. I'm still hoping it was a set. Flash? *grumble*
Author Comments
This is my first short live action film. Yes, it's not what you're used to on Newgrounds, but please view it for what it is. Thanks and enjoy.
Neozac responds:
Nope not a set. We just live in Sloth. Come on man - what the hell?
Hmmmm
It wasn't that bad for your first try, but it wasn't scary at all, and It was a little bit boring. I hope your next project will be a little bit better :)
Good Luck
not bad for a first try
but there is absolutely no suspense or fright felt from your shots, cuts, acting, or underscore. If you tried editing it more or taking additional shots this might work.
hmmm
It really wasnt all that creepy or scary just weird.... i found myself bored watching it
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Wow......