it's not that bad

Sure it could've been done better but it's funny.

Not Bad

If you ever find yourself using Flash again (traditional animation is definitely doable in Flash), reduce the file size of your music so the piece isn't so large. You should add a "replay" button at the end so it doesn't automatically loop. As it is now, the music sounds more and more hammered each time it loops over itself. Also, work on your timing because the last title card only appears for a second. The art is pretty cool and it's obvious you've got some talent in this arena. Hopefully, you'll produce more and post it here on NG!

Cute...

...but takes way too long to load for something so short!

Nice start...

Make it longer next time. You have potential. Good job!

Too short...

A great first effort. However, it's length will most likely prevent a great score. Keep at it, though.