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Hey my 3rd flash movie, posibly my 2nd unblammed one. and review honestly becuase i want see what i can improve on in my next flash
The last part was sarcastic... lol
The beginning was a little weird but as soon as it got to the last, the messages you put up there, "I gave you plenty of time to exit... ... " That message was sarcastic in a humorous way. Maybe if you improve some things in the graphics, this could be a great flash movie. Perhaps lengthening a descriptive story line?...
Like the others said below, if done right this could be really funny. The animation was very poor and it wasn't really something to watch. Make better animation, and focus on more details.
K tyvm ( that was a usefull review!)
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Funny concept but the graphics could use a little work. Should be smoother and a bit longer. Remember that your animations are like using a paint brush and all things need to be connected and smoooth, unless Picasso is your goal. Newgrounds is the canvas, treat is nicely and let the viewers be rewarded. lol
k thanks for the designing info i'll try to get a better version of this flash in!
7/10 - 1/5
However, As the others have commented, It has no story line and barely any animation. Keep trying at your flashes and eventually, You might just be as good as some in the top 50!
The song was good, The art was.. Ok.
Just work at it, And you'll do great. :D
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