Score: 5
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date: September 21, 2008
Graphics:6/10
Animation:6/10
Sound Effects4/10
Voice-overs:-/10
Music:5/10
Plot:3/10
Overall:5/10
Well, you still have some work to do, but it will all come with practice. Your drawings weren't all that bad, but they could use some improvemet. The animation wasn't to horrible, but you had some gap times, and some of it could be done a bit more fancily. The sound effects were ok, but they had gaptime inbetween them. You would have the sound-effect end, then half a second later the other one would come in. Same with the music. Gotta work on that. The plot of this, however, made little to no sense. It was interesting, but confusing. I know the madness series is about random violence, but they did have a visible plot, this one did not. Keep trying though.
The alpha and Omega,
[JasonGrimm]
September 21, 2008
Author's Response:
whoa this really puts me on a bad situation, the way you put it like makes me wanna delete this and re-do it lol and it's a miracle it got 3 out of a 5 on the "current score" board, but thanks for the tips and clicks man! Appreciate it!