Needs a lot of Polish

Im sorry but this falsh was not very good at all. The animation was choppy and slow, It had no sound. And you were trying to emulate one of the best animations on the Internet. It was an attempt I guess and so I give you credit for that. However, before trying to emulate one of the best I would recommend it looks as good as the original, if not better. Practice, spend some time and get that skill to the level, where it challenges the original artist. I'm not saying stop posting, what I'm saying is post more stuff and get better. Spend more time getting the skill up!

Needs more time and practice.

uhmm....

you should practice a bit more, the sound..well there was no sound, the animation was choppy and...well i cant say anyting else, the sound and the animation are everything in a movie, you should spend more time practicing, i recommend you using motion sweet and looped symbols, those things do magic

dont get lazy

you got way to lazy didnt do any sound effects stop moving stuff and ended it for that you get 2 come on you can do it try harder :D

bad

short is an understatement. that dosent count as anything. i did not like it.

sorry man

But i don't think this should be put up. Go back and work on it. Make it less choppy, add sound, and possibly make it longer