Sorry guys that this isn't the best, but I'm looking for CONSTRUCTIVE Criticism here. The version that I posted on youtube didn't turn out right, SO I was going to post it on Alphas, and then realized that was for unfinished projects, and not this. This didn't take long, but it took time to make.
So I would like Constructive Criticism for this video, so I can Improve it, and re-upload a better version.
There are some parts that aren't that great, but please, help me out here. I want to make some better ones, I need some Constructive criticism.
Timewisard(NG), Shikamaru1438(YouTube), Link1438 (most other places)
P.S.: I AM Aware of the spelling mistake, it was a typo
P.P.S.: I know about the Viewer discretion is advised, since I have subscribers on YouTube, of a younger age, I have to throw in that tag because YouTube doesn't have a rating system. It's actually about 100 frames so I don't think it's THAT long. (On the default FPS)