it was ok
that screen at the beginning talking about how it contains blah blah blah lasted a little long
Author Comments
Sorry guys that this isn't the best, but I'm looking for CONSTRUCTIVE Criticism here. The version that I posted on youtube didn't turn out right, SO I was going to post it on Alphas, and then realized that was for unfinished projects, and not this. This didn't take long, but it took time to make.
So I would like Constructive Criticism for this video, so I can Improve it, and re-upload a better version.
There are some parts that aren't that great, but please, help me out here. I want to make some better ones, I need some Constructive criticism.
Thanks,
Timewisard(NG), Shikamaru1438(YouTube), Link1438 (most other places)
P.S.: I AM Aware of the spelling mistake, it was a typo
P.P.S.: I know about the Viewer discretion is advised, since I have subscribers on YouTube, of a younger age, I have to throw in that tag because YouTube doesn't have a rating system. It's actually about 100 frames so I don't think it's THAT long. (On the default FPS)
timewisard responds:
ah yes, sorry about that. Since YouTube doesn't have a rating system, I feel I should need to put that there. Although the youtube version doesn't work well... the sprites aren't animated right in some parts.
uhhh
why would u submit a sprite test as far as sprites go there nothing to test the pasted stolen images no skill 2nd u shouldn't submit a test nobody wants to watch u attempt to learn the utter most basicness of flash submit sumthing if u think its worth ppls time to watch elsewise dont bother waste of time and file space
not bad for a test.
The only problem I have is that you really need to shorten the size of the file. That is probably why it is not running right. Especially if you computer sucks like mine does. Try to compress the file a bit. That might help part of your problem.
timewisard responds:
XD I don't know how :P
It's actually running fine... o.O It's just because I might have animated it wrong.
not to shabby!
however it isnt the greatest thing i've ever seen. funny, but it seemed as though you could have gone farther with it. i didnt notice anything wrong with it, but maybe instead of just ripping off raiden's head, you could have scorpion uppercut him, then raiden starts crying or something, then scorpion comes to comfort him. and when he does raiden pulles a sneak attack, then you can have scorpion get mad and flame his ass, then good and simple add the toasty again lol. funnest part for me =P
timewisard responds:
Ok, thanks!
I'll try and add something like that, the point of it was, to see what people thought.
Intresting
I like this one. There wasnt much to laugh about or watch over again but it was OK. Good Job!
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