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finally got around to submitting this now.
>.> W-T-F was that? <.<
i love that song
man u need some vocies, if u want to make it better, and the clouds were floating the wrong way lol
Short, but sweet
I really enjoyed the animation. The drawn characters were colorful and fit the styling the animation was going for. The music was also at a very good level: not too loud, not too soft. Additionally, the pacing was perfect for the text boxes.
Suggested areas of improvement:
-The whale character was jumping in the background...something felt missing without splashing noises
-Even though the animation was presented in text to move the storyline, the character who was doing the talking had the same expression the entire time. Make the character look as though he is talking, even for a few seconeds, when each new text box appears.
Your animation was ok, as was the audio. And maybe its just because I read fast, but you gave a bit too much time for each block of text (I was able to reread the sentances 3-times each time). Other than that, the movie was a bit short, but still It was good.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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