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This is my first finished joint, took sometime because I left it, some words are spelled wrong on purpose to give off that "cartoon" feel, like hoospital and stuff like that, enjoy... :D
though the animation and drawing were a lil on the sloppy side(i ubderstand tho, so no harm no foul, eh?) it actually had a plot and story!
thank you, spanned.
at least some people can actually work on something before they enter it.
i tottaly dig the music
really sets the mood in the movie
I hope you plan on making another one.
Really great flash, loved the couch scene! one thing though: your art is too good to be accented by tacky writing. it looks out of place and funky. I know YOUR hand writing is better than that script!
you obviously have no problem with creativity, so no excuses! :)
It started off amazingly, and i was like 'wow, this animation is awesome'. But then it went all dull and not much was moving. But frame by frame is a very exhausting task so i'll let you off.
It would be cool to see more of your frame by frame stuff, like when the guy was jumping around the buildings at the beginning. And then when he was walking towards the sofa, would love to see more animation like that.
It was a good cartoon though, i didn't really see the point in all the bad spellings like you said, just sort of made it look messy. The story was quite interesting too, although it drifted off when he was lazing about just watching TV for the majority of the cartoon. It has potential though, will be looking forward to more stuff from you.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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