Score: 6
"Those noises... made it unique."
date: December 4, 2008
Seriously, those sfx are insane. I guess the coughing and other weird noises for humour value? Well it worked - I was giggling away and this is definitely gonna stick in my mind.
I enjoyed the way the style kept switching but the story progressed on - like a 'pass-my-flash' effort.
There were some weaker parts of animation but thankfully nothing remained onscreen for long and there was usually a better bit of work to make up for it.
I'd suggest that for your next effort you either try and get better animators working together or maybe do what Luis did and have folk competing for the next spot.
Though I'd never recommend this, it did put a smile on my face.