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FUCK YOU Hazzah!
sum sic shit right here yeah. keep up the nice work. I like the tweenings and add music next time too! LoL!
Thanks for the review, friend!
This was one movie that just didn't agree with me.
Visually it wasn't much. Just a squiggle tweened, both shaped and motioned. But that's about it. Besides the text that the end. Nothing much else there.
No audio to be heard which was a disappointment. Could've turned my opinion in your favour.
OVerall,you need to put alot more thought into your flashes. It was good for a first try but that's what the api for. Just for testing. Back to the drawing bored I think
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It was a BOOMERANG!!!!!!
Setting that aside, did you liek the text? :)
And I would've added audio if there wasn't a HUGE problem! After following teh instructions for adding audio, I tested it. NO AUDIO CAME OUT!! T_T x15
So, something's gone horribly wrong with that!
Alot more thought, eh? Hmm... I was just too excited to think of something good!
Back to the drawing BOARD, I guess.
only one thing was funny about this
and that was the fact you put spam as the genre, anyway, it needed something more than just a shape moving around, audio would've helped greatly, and plots are always a big help, maybe the adventures of a boomerang or something, work on it
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T_T Dammit I wish I could! But my flash program went away for ever & ever!
I think you could totally make a cool movie just with tweens, but not like this!
Give it some music, make it move to a rhythm, make the shape more visually interesting - or perhaps something 'perfect' like a circle or square.
I find it hilarious that you honestly give the Genre.
I used a circle on my OTHER Clock Day flash! Go view that if youre unsatisfied with the shape here! Yea, I suck at flash. Honestly, I do. So the best I could do in one day was a motion tween!
Thanks for teh review!
Genre says it all
And this is just one of the reasons that I have no time for you on the BBS.
Personal feelings aside, allow me to critique the flash itself - it's a random boomerang shape in black on a white background. You've done shape contortions, which pull and push it around the screen. I would have tried to start the flash with something that has plot. Hell, I've seen preloaders that have more animation (and indeed filesize) than this submission.
I think that you could do with adding plot, animation, sound, jokes that have humour, rather than "The End LOLZ" and overall an attempt to do something worth submitting.
I've said on a few occasions that you might be worth saving, but your continued persistence in hanging with the wrong types and generally being an imbecile has reduced my opinion of this situation.
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Ok, I understand. btw it was "The end, yo! ;D" But oh well. I just made this in one day! The day before clock day. I wasn't planning to, but the people's blogs inspired me too! AND I HOPE YOU READ THIS: Yoshi77777 told me "you can even submit your crap on this day and it's guaranteed to pass"
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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