LOL

I've always wanted to kill that fairy. XoD
I think your flash is good.

Come On

I did my first flash and it was longer and made more sense than this but mine got BLAMMED! For the first flash it was good I guess, but I'm still pissed.

The Potential Is There

Considering that this is your first flash, not the most horrible thing I've ever seen. I have seen some flashes from so-called "artists" who swear that they've been doing it for years, and are so-called "experts" at it, that look like something that would MS Paint would put out if my dog was just licking the keyboard. Anyway, just keep working on it and learning, and you'll get better. Everyone has to start somewhere, and this is a decent enough place you're at.

hey man

yh or your first flash its not too bad keep it up. looking forward to new submissions in the future

hmm kinda odd...

but it was okay even if its ur first flash, good luck for ur nxt flash if ur makin another one.