I like it :D
Good song choice and an ok game to play
This is my first real dress up game :3 I hope you enjoy it
Everything but the music (c) me
song = Blow Me Away (c) Breaking Benjamin
I like it :D
Good song choice and an ok game to play
Fun little game
The outfits were all nice and as well drawn as the character but I do believe and know that had you spent a little more time drawing everything in this dress up and did a little more attention to detail that you perhaps could have made a game worthy of the front page at that time. Aside from all of this, you did a wonderful job of choosing things for her to wear.
SCTE3
Why thank you~ Though you've come come a few months late with your art critique XD; It's still very much apreciated
kewl
AWESOME!!! =DDDDDDD
Thanks ^^
That was verry cool.
Your taiste of music is sick. You know good music when you see it, dont you?
Thanks! I got my good taste in music from my friends actually
Typical Fare - But a Good Starting Point
As was said before, this is nothing particularly new or different. It's a dress-up game. I agree that it is a little cluttered, but it is nice to have a number of things to select from. I found that the alements were a bit too similar to one another - some more variety in the clothing would help turn quantity into quality. To help minimize the clutter, perhaps different types of items could be placed in a separate window that allows you to flip through your selections - like a virtual closet - and hang them back up when a change of clothes is selected. It may also be of interest to cause items (some - if not all) to snap into position once close enough to the worn position. Lastly, ditch the current music. There is no reason why - out of the gazillions of songs that exist - that that one should be on there. If you want to add music - seek an original composition by someone on the music portal, get the permission and include their song on your game. That will supply a reason for it to be there and it will add something unique to your game to help make it stand out. I think this is a good start to a good dress-up game here - it just needs some more tweaking.
Thank you for the very detailed review. It'll help me out alot when I start tweaking the game again. ^^ And the only reason alot of the outfits look similar is because those are her original outfit designs, her trademark colors really. But when I add a few more outfits (plus alot more space) I'll vary the colors more :3 And unfortunetly I'm not nearly advanced enough to do the whole "snap-into-place" feature. I've only had flash for about 4 days. Lastly, I think I will go try and find another good song to put in the game instead of the one that plays now.