Better
I like this better than the first trailer. And god I love how Zues yells burgers at the end. The trailer builds a very venture broters adult swim vibe.
The pilot speaks fo itself. I'd watch this.
Author Comments
TITLE: Olympus Burger Trailer NEWGROUNDS CUT 2
RUNTIME: 1:11
Hey there!
Thanks so much to everyone who gave feedback for the first cut,
it's was tremendously helpful. I did myself justice and animated the opening titles, so here's the updated version. Is it ready?
We've cut this as promo material to help us pitch the show to networks,
and to hopefully get more hits on video sites like YouTube (because that's what TV Networks are looking for now)
I've posted it here on Newgrounds before it's official release to get feedback from the community I trust.
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The trailer contains some footage from the Pilot, some new animations I dug out of the vault, and backstory regarding the series origin of the Gods at Olympus Burger
Please post a review of what you think.
Does it look like a "real show"?
Any editing/content suggestions?
Thanks for checking it out! Sorry for the filesize, it was edited in Final Cut.
Well...
It really doesnt look like a real show, i mean you just have a few drawn pictures for most characters, and the main detail looks like its all just traced bitmap. The only thing you actually animate even REASONABLY well is the mouths! and all the rest are just motion tweens, Also the characters on the clips you took were slightly blurred, resulting in them looking Really Really unproffesional... Seriously.
Well now heres the good parts... Sort of.
The text and effects on the logo are good, it makes me feel like im watching a movie trailer. And the sound was epic. The whol cloud idea with the names of the gods was good, and the lipsync went very well with the voice acting.
Animating - 3
Lipsync - 9
Effects - 6
Voice Acting - 10
Im giving you a 7 cause im nice.
Much improved
This time around it felt really pro. The opening subtitles being animated was definitely a nice touch. This version was perfect.
Sound-O-Vision responds:
Thanks! I'm refining it even more (especially the intro) so hopefully the next cut will be the final.
Way to go!
Well done! This was better and more professional looking (as compared to the first cut), you very nearly have a winner here!
The animation was smooth, and the added effects give the whole trailer much more emphasis this time around.
This really deserves a perfect score, but something was missing, and I'm not sure what; perhaps someone else will figure it out.
All in all, great job!
- Jonathan
Sound-O-Vision responds:
Hey Jonathan, thanks for the review! I'm working on the final cut now, rehashing the intro big-time and modifying the character bumps a little. I think it will really shine, I expect it to be complete in about a week or so. Thanks again for the review!
hey dudes
adult swim
send it there
i expect great results
this show has SOOOOOOOO much potential
you'd have all those greek stories to work with
mix in new stories based on now events
i'm pretty xcited bout this
:D :D :D :D :D
Sound-O-Vision responds:
Glad you like it! We'll be bringing more soon!