What?

Well, there's really no animation, beside the preloader, so it's really hard for me to give you a good score...The body of the flash was really nothing more than some hand-written text. I will say that the graphic style was quite interesting and dark-looking, though. I did get that kind of vibe from this.
Sadly, a lack of content makes this hard to give a proper review. :(

Youtube

I think this is more of a youtube video. If you add a lot of animation that you made or something like that then ya it should be on newgrounds. But until then post it on youtube.