Score: 10

"Awesome again!"

by: MindDemon

date: July 15, 2008

I kept reading it, and I loved it more every time. Sweet job on your comics!

Score: 5

"Hmm..."

by: MeatLoafFan

date: July 12, 2008

Okay premise, but it didn't have the same dark sadistic humour of "Daddy Day Kill". The plot is pretty much non-existant, and the only funny part was the ending.

Daddy Day Kill, had sick music, and the entire thing was funny, every aspect, while here the only funny part was the punchline, and it was expected, you knew what was going to happen (which in most cases is okay, but only if its really gruesome).

If you decided to re-do this one, the length you can't really do anything about,

- add a start button,
- add some music,
- add a background,

and you'd get a 6 from me, instead of a 5.

On future flashes, you "have to spend more time on it!". Sorry, you may hate to hear it, but its true.

For some reason, I felt it was harder to move from panel to panel in this one, in Daddy Day Kill it was more, better transitioned?

Anyway, hope I didn't break your spirits, the comic aspect does not deter me (or should deter anyone else) from your comics...? Flash? lol...

Keep making flashes,

Score: 8

"I liked it..."

by: JoePimpz

date: July 11, 2008

but, u need to make that in to animation instead of like a comic book, Next time have them move and junk.

Score: 5

"Well..."

by: Megaphor

date: July 11, 2008

The comic overall was good.

For the record though, almost all the flashes here are either animated movies or interactive games. I'll give you props for treading the untested waters of comic submissions here, but it probably would have worked better as a YTMND, or something to submit on DeviantArt.

Also, if you were to continue the comic submissions on NG ( which by any means, feel free to ), make the NEXT button locked in just one area of the screen. Some background music would've helped too.

Score: 7

"Not bad"

by: kid-dude

date: July 11, 2008

But if there are two of you and one has flash, then you are more than able to actually add animation. Try it, see what happens. I think you'll find you'll get a much better reception.

ps. you need to spend more time on it.... lol jk :P