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Other than the effects being somewhat okay, it doesn't really have anything to it. Plus clicking dialog is boo!
Author Comments
This is an example. Basicly, I'm testing my flash skills. I changed Red Boo's Son's name to Super Shlarp Chronicles. The series will be a lot better this time, and fighting will be much more intense. It will be like this, and as it goes on, it will get even better.
FPS: 24
Time Taken: 4 days
vote 5 *shot*
You have skills
You have skills now just use them. You need to make it longer and mabye some action and music to build some effect and draw people into your video
You got that from the Caterpie beat up Onix.
Obviously. Your skills are good overall, I just recommend more of a "story". And make them original if you're going to make these kinds of videos. Cause peeple can get angered by these.
LarrytheShlarp responds:
Caterpie beat up Onix...? No I didn't.
^_^
the effects are ok
o_O
I had no frakin clue what was going on... but that was cool! CAN I RIDE AGAIN, MOMMY!?!?!?