Score: 7
"Not Bad"
date: May 31, 2008
As far as trailers go, it's not bad at all. I do have a few points though.
Firstly, it's spelt operations, not oppirations. Not a huge deal but I've had contact with many ppl who will rip the crap out of you for those 2 letters.
Secondly, you can afford to be more fearless when recording (assuming that's your voice). You sound as if you are holding back and like the speaker doesn't really believe in what he's saying. The man over the radio would probably be talking quietly, if waiting for a command within enemy perimeter, but he would have full confidence in what he's saying, seen as he's telling it how it is.
Lastly, seen as this is a trailer, it should have a little bit more information about the final animation, even if it's just a small blurb in between bits of action. This is only an issue here, so you won't have to worry about it when making the full clip (which I definately think you should do) but bear that in mind should you make another trailer in the future.
Overall, your animation is good and I look forward to seeing the full version. :)
May 31, 2008
Author's Response:
thanx for the 7...
and yes i no stuff is spelt wrong but i thought since it is a trailer it wudn't matter...
i was also gonna make little blurbs between just like you siad but i made this last night at about 3am... it was late and i wasn't thinking straight.
i was thinkin of makin a game 2
thanx for the points though... i will keep it in mind