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This is a Trailer to an animation i will make depending on how many ppl like it or if it even gets accepted :D
NOTE: this is just a trailer....it doesn't go for very long so dont expect much....
anyways hope yas like
P.S I just though it wud make a great game too....so i mite make the game aswell :D
Is that supposed to be halo? i mean johnson, and the ar (assault rifle) no offense but if it is they don't really use helicopters in halo
I SHOULD KNOW LOL
Go ahead with it, the movies look like they could be good,
As far as trailers go, it's not bad at all. I do have a few points though.
Firstly, it's spelt operations, not oppirations. Not a huge deal but I've had contact with many ppl who will rip the crap out of you for those 2 letters.
Secondly, you can afford to be more fearless when recording (assuming that's your voice). You sound as if you are holding back and like the speaker doesn't really believe in what he's saying. The man over the radio would probably be talking quietly, if waiting for a command within enemy perimeter, but he would have full confidence in what he's saying, seen as he's telling it how it is.
Lastly, seen as this is a trailer, it should have a little bit more information about the final animation, even if it's just a small blurb in between bits of action. This is only an issue here, so you won't have to worry about it when making the full clip (which I definately think you should do) but bear that in mind should you make another trailer in the future.
Overall, your animation is good and I look forward to seeing the full version. :)
thanx for the 7...
and yes i no stuff is spelt wrong but i thought since it is a trailer it wudn't matter...
i was also gonna make little blurbs between just like you siad but i made this last night at about 3am... it was late and i wasn't thinking straight.
i was thinkin of makin a game 2
thanx for the points though... i will keep it in mind
Looks good so far
Whilst I am not a big fan of trailers, since they are incomplete by nature, this looks pretty good if the actual game play is as you say it is. Also I see a lot of similarity to Doom. I would like to see the finished game, so you should make it.
i am soooo lookin forward to this !
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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