cool
i thought it was cool
Author Comments
just basic stuff, one of my first creations so dont btoher about criting, still trying to learn
why no loader? cause the file where i worked was lost and it was done BEFORE i figured out how to do so, all my current have one though
stuff is copyrighted to their rightfull owner
Zelos character and sign is mine is mine
Needs improvement
Compared to the style of pictures and words and the beginning compared to the rest of the preview are excellent and draw the viewer in but the animations from then on out are poorly done and needs more than a generic plot-line to intrigue people, Other than a few drawbacks, a little work and it could be decent, maybe.
EmperorZelos responds:
its my first try XD; i have never dealt with flash before, but atleast you give some stuff. im glad atleast someone tries to give constructive critisism if any
Soounds sexi lol
sounds interesting
Zelos may be yours but...
Taking Shadow and changing him to purple and giving him red eyes isn't really a good thing...
EmperorZelos responds:
X3 better than takng shadow
hm.
the music is just annoying. there is a white stripe on the left side, untidy. and the story, which you try to make interesting, is not interesting. you should show a little morsel of the special something of your story. its not there for me.
EmperorZelos responds:
again first try with sprite XD;
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