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this is my very first submittion here in NG..
and this is my very first Flash Animation(20fps)...
somehow, i don't think the movie is good enough since this is my first time, but still,
I hope you'll enjoy!!
oh yeah, please look forward for the second part!
i would like to have some comments pls...
I liked it very much. Pretty good for your first animation, and nicely done :) Good work i'm looking forward to the second part :)
Change your frame rate to 24 fps or higher, otherwise you get choppy animation.
i'll try 30fps for the 2nd part... is it alright? or higher than 30? well, i'll try 30 !! thanks anyway....
You could be proud of this.
I know its not perfect and its lacking some speed.
But trust me this is a very good movie for your first flash.
You can be proud!
The animation shows a lot of promise. I'm never all that fond of stick animations, as an artist, I tend to think of them as a cop out. However, yours was nicely animated. I do however have some suggestions.
People have a nasty habit of randomly appearing and dissapearing. I don't know if they're supposed to do that, but you might want to show some frames making them slowly fade away if you want them to be able to turn invisible.
I've also noticed that you tend to over do the slow-mo thing. It can be cool, but, like I said, it's a little over done.
Also, lastly, try to clean up the english a little bit. I know, it may be silly, but it's really jarring to me when words are misspelled and the grammar is all off. It makes it hard to read, and I actually missed some things in the animation because I was trying to read the text.
Thats all! keep up the good work! And I am looking forward to part 2.
Nice for your first submission
Yea not too bad man, especially for your first submission, just keep practicing and your work will improve. The way i learnt to use flash was from a book, and doing a night course. but i am still constantly learning. Anyways, very nice for a first attempt!
i learnt flash all by myself... ^^
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