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An Albatross and a Seagull were never meant to be together.
Animation is good, sound is good, content is good. Voices just seemed a little flat, and with the majority of the flash feeling dialouge driven that hurt it a little bit.
That was good, it was interesting
Good, stuff, not my taste but well done. Bravo
Well, firstly: Excellent animations. I mean, pristine. Just breath-taking, so 101/10 for that reason alone.
Secondly: The script. Quite philosophical and thought-provoking, I hope you intended it this way, if not, then you have some un-tapped genius there. 10/10
However...the voice acting wasn't great. While this isn't usually a problem for me, the voice acting kind of ruined the script. While you have never claimed to be a voice actor, and therefore I cannot hold this against you, a script of such professionalism should truthfully deserve voice acting of the same quality.
I want to be an
ALBATROSS! His life seems so easy! He just flies around alone, all day, with the sund and the wind and the clouds and the ocean...that's the life! He's just an albatross!
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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