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Bad Day Golfing

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Alright... made this movie to practice drawing different terrians and wanted to get some tips but if i showed just differnt types of earth it would get no where.. so i added a guy golfing and made it all a motion tween.

Please review it and give me any tips and pointers on how i can improve my flash editing skills, Thanks in advance.

Zake

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Good start

I'd recommend you start to focus on adding detail. You seem to have basics down pat, and the background is excellent. Work on individual blades of grass and leaves on the trees, and I'm convinced that you can make better characters than a stick figure. Iron these out and practice constantly. You've got a promising start.

not bad...

but try using more effects like for example, when the ball first hit the ground it could've used a small cloud of dust or something

sorry, i liked it but...

good idea. more is nessisary for it to come off as good. sorry. more realism, more danger, whatever. good idea.

Good

It was good but you need to make it a little longer with like uther bad golfing experiences.

man..

i thought that was hilarious.

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3,449
Votes
5
Score
2.70 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 3, 2008
11:31 PM EDT