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This is my first flash ever expressing my feelings for a very important moment in my life. Please dont be too harsh.
The angel looks like a flying dick
For future reference: When trying to convey something serious, do not use stick figures. Also, don't draw clouds that look like turkeys..
I for one can't take something drawn with stick figures completely seriously. Like someone else suggested, you should probably develop some sort of style before attempting this again. It will probably go over better.
I have trouble drawing real people. But thanks for the criticism
I understand it all to well. My younger brother was killed. I liked your story. Even if it was a little short there was no mistaking the point.
A well made first flash, BUT...
Based in your newbiness status:
Backgrounds = Good.
Music & sfx = Regular.
Character's graphics = Terrible.
Use of preloader = Excellent.
Now, for the pros, a nice first flash movies with something more than some sticks killing each other of some penises introducing themselves to some orifice. A background music that goes with the theme and mood, etc.
For the cons: If it IS a depiction of an important moment of your life, you didn't quite express it at all by using stick figures, you could have as well drawn some basic characters if you were able of drawing a background of decent quality.
Overall, it shall not be balmmed, good nice entry, please refine more your flash skills and make a remake of thes movie in the future when you feel you have more experience in the field of flash.
It was very short and not drawn so good either, but the thing that happened made me shiver for 2 seconds.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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