Slow, but good

The action was slow and kinda laggy. The shading of the charaters was a good idea, but lessen the darkness of the shading, but it has excellent pontential.

Not really that impressed.

Everything goes TOO SLOW. I didn't watch it all the way through b/c you dragged it out with slow movement and long pauses. I don't like the way you used the bevel filter, just because it's beveled, that doesn't make it good.

I must emphasize that it WAS TOO SLOW. Speed up the action and MAYBE I'll watch it all the way through before judging it.