Score: 5
"Good concept"
date: April 24, 2008
The concept was great (though it's pretty much Draw-Play without the flags.. or obstacles...) but you need to work on it more. Having the restart button invisible made it hard to find at first (I actually found it by accident doing that "raise the player" trick). Also, having it in the middle meant it kept getting in the way. I'd go to click and it would restart.
Also, it should have a clear button to clear away all that you've drawn. And along those lines an eraser.
Another review already covered colours and line sizes.
Anyway great "sandbox" concept, it'd be fun to play around with (just like linerider), but it needs a LOT of work to be one of the greats. :)
April 26, 2008
Author's Response:
I've done that on my laptop but thats being serviced right now.
Oh crap.
Jon
EDIT
Look out for v2, I've uploaded onto my website already so take a look:
www.geocities.com/jonoweekes
and now newgrounds:
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /436765
Its not that much better except you can now change the start point and move about while your drawing without having to play the game at the same time. Oh and stop is the return key.
Jon
