Mario is Luigi
This was random, but I think your music could use a little improvement, also where do you get those Mario sound effects from?
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EDIT1: HOORAY! I finally put in the credits and the easter egg (try to find it)!!!
A Pointless Short By Yoshibrains
I hope you all like it... give me ideas or replies to tell me what i could fix. Thanks!
I was too lazy to put the credits into the movie so here they are!
yoshibrains responds:
themushroomkingdom.net!! It is an amazing site!
ZOMG!
PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME! lolz xD and wtf the whole world explodes with onion breath? LOL
yoshibrains responds:
lol Glad you liked it! :)
Too Choppy
The animation wasn't very smooth, there was poor delivery of punch lines, add more dynamics instead of just part a does something then part b reacts. You need to have them flow evenly. Sound effects were alright, but please try again.
yoshibrains responds:
You're too serious about animation!... But thanks for the input!
waagawaga
wagga
Was kind of funny
It had its funny moments, and I liked the bus ending. But I think some of the jokes was kind of boring and I'd like to see smoother animations. But it wasnt bad and I liked most parts of it, keep up the good work : )