it was preety good. not ur best work, it didnt have me laughing my ass off but it was ok
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
this is a series of 5 diff robots and there stupid life
ratchet: a normal robot like you and me
short circet: a retard robot you know what im just gonna delete
this I dont like it you dont like so ok
angle: a douchebag robot
6.9: a jock robot
c.a.r: a talking car
it was preety good. not ur best work, it didnt have me laughing my ass off but it was ok
Dont like it sorry. Stop motion pro or something I bet.
You have some pretty fluid stop motion there, I'll give you props for that alone, the sound quality sucks however. You need to record with headphones on because PC speakers create a whine if you record while they're turned on.
Also, get different people to do voices, when you alone play every character it becomes readily apparent very quick. If you have an option to turn up the base on your recording, do so because you sound like a nine-year-old kid. Download Audacity (www.audacity.com... I don't know, Google it.) and use it to reduce the pitch of your voice. Robots aren't supposed to sound so, for the lack of a better term, adolescent.
Very fluid work. Do more but lose the kid voice (pitch down via Audacity), get more people for characters and try to have more of a plot.
Keep it up.
It'd be better if you made the audio funnier and more clear. To be honest, it doesn't actually sound like you scripted it at all...
Work on the dialogue and i could see this having potential but as it stands it just doesn't hold up