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i think it was pretty cool, but yeah it could move a bit faster
hope i dont get any chain messages!!!!
Author Comments
This is my first movie worth submitting to newgrounds... so please dont be harsh and spam me with useless things... i'll gladly accept any critics that may help improve my work...
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I just hate chain messages... dont u? i've just about had it with them so here's a movie that can serve as a warning to you all chain spammers!!!
Plz rate.... ty
It's good, but requires some improvement.
It's decent for a first movie, but i'd have to suggest making it a little bit more fast paced, and perhaps adding a little something in the 'murder scene'; otherwise, it's pretty good!
yeah
Cool message! But u might add some more details maybe?(graphical)
cool anyway !
amusing idea but extremely slow
This was an amusing idea, however it is an idea i have seen many times before, ultimately your version could have been quite good except it went to slow, also the lack of an eerie background music made it a little bit boring. Id suggest speeding it up a little and adding some eeries background music, and perhaps be a bit more graphic with the death scene, as it seems silly to do a death scene in siloutte when you have already pointlessly swore early in the animation.
A nice try keep working at it.
obi23lipnik responds:
ty for ur respond... i'll try that in next movies...
i decided to go with the silouette bcoz of the gore... yeah... kindoff a pointless swear :D but i swear every time i get a chain mail...
Eheheheheheh!
Really nice work! I would add some sounds, but still a good flash.
I should show this movie to some of my friends...
STOP WITH THOSE CHAIN MAILS! GhGh!
Great man!
obi23lipnik responds:
ty :P and if u're sick of the chain mails... spread the word :PP
