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Mar 15, 2008 | 12:46 PM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place March 16, 2008

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Chapter 16 is where chapter 11 left off with the battle at King Kanos kingdom. Hidding out at a village that is populated with no warriors but scholars , and poets The King thinks he is safe till the same Dinosaurs that destroyed their kingdom has caught up with them.

Reviews


ben-paskoben-pasko

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 20, 2008

meh....

it was okay.. but I think this series is waaaay too long.
it wasnt that different from the others either.



Gate-keeper-girlGate-keeper-girl

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 25, 2008

A few flaws, but otherwise very good.

Sorry I'm not a big fan of these, but they've improved over the episodes.
I was especially impressed with the last minute or so of animation.
Work on walking loops, I noticed a little "stuttering" (I've had that problem more times than I can count)

You have a good style, but I've noticed, that the quality of the character drawing greatly affects it's range of movement. (Better drawn beasts/dinosaurs usually move less)
It's all about adapting a style for animaiton, while keeping true to your drawings.
The women usually fall into the same poses, learn to draw more angles, and this could be fixed.

The backgrounds and environments were more interesting to me than the characters, but that's my view.
Still, not saying you should stop doing what you're doing, but you should challenge yourself. Try new ways of presenting your stories, and push your boundaries (I would like to see more fight scenes, like in the older episodes, because those were very well animated)

Good luck!

-GKG



MegaMiloMegaMilo

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 24, 2008

Cool

Wow tht was quite cool but i think there needed to be more action.



samuraibob27samuraibob27

Rated 3 / 5 stars March 24, 2008

very nice!

Overall i think it was very good, but without seeing the other ones, i couldnt really grasp the whole "run away in the sewers with the hot gorilla chicks" thing. Could have used a little bit more action, but just enough to keep fools like me satisfied. Otherwise...very nice



rodnokkerrodnokker

Rated 3 / 5 stars March 15, 2008

good

u no what would help.....Torok