Audio is terrible

I like the art, and I really lol'd at the poster in the first part, but damn, you gotta work on the audio.

Great drawing style.

I love the artwork. very unique and interesting...

but the movie just wasn't very funny. Try working on audio quality (microphone "pops" from p or b sounds), humor, and loudness. It was pretty quiet.

But I love the hair and backgrounds. Put a little more effort into the humor section and you'll have yourself a fine, dandy, little piece of flash.