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[L7C] Random Collab! #10

February 21, 2008 –
January 16, 2009
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

Random Collab #10

Menu-yoshi77777
Mario-MarioMan360
Madness-ZombiePhil

Reviews

These collabs might have had so much more potential if you would have thrown most of them together. I'm assuming you were more worried about getting your flash count up, but if you would of thrown these random collabs together they might have gotten around 3.0's and up.

Animation/Graphics - Not bad. I like the menu. While it was simple it was still animated, which is always something nice to add to a flash animation. The Mario scene was just a little rough, but actually animated pretty well. The filler was random, but wasn't much to see animation wise. The Madness scene would have to be the worst animated piece on this collab.

Story/Content - We will start off with the Mario scene since there really isn't any story/content behind the menu. The Mario scene was the exact definition of random. The mushroom exploding was the perfect random part of the scene. I had no clue that it was going to happen and it caught me by complete surprise. The madness scene wasn't that good. It was just simply one person getting shot in the head and there wasn't anything in terms of bullets being shot, backgrounds, or anything like that.

Audio - I loved the music that went on the menu. A very nice choice there. The Mario scene had good background music and sound effects. The only problem again was the fact that there wasn't any gun shot sound effect or anything in the Madness scene.

Overall - You should have put these together man. They probably wouldn't have been considered spam as much and they would have gotten much better scores. Too late now though. =P

silly noobie. Make more than this. The effects were crappy, the file size was huge for something so short, and the one right before zombie phil's was so choppy and the graphics so shitty that it must have been made by you. Also phil's gun effect was stupid and he didn't use any motion tweens. Teach him how to, if you actually know how to.

hey guys, I don't wanna be a dick but all I could think to say was WTF? Handing out insults isn't what I do here on NG so I wanna give you guys some constructive criticism so that when you guys put out ur next vid, hopefully you will get positive feed back. I like the Random collab idea, it's great and not done all that often. Sprites are always awesome (personal preference) and you can almost never go wrong with Madness characters. However, there needs to be a consistency within the flash toon. One incredibly short scene is not nearly enough. You may have been trying to keep it short and that's cool but there's short and then there's basically non-existant. Those scenes were the ladder. Great choice of music I thought and the madness animation was drawn quite well. The middle animation however... I honestly have to say that it was God-awful...sorry. I didn't know what it was supposed to be and it looked horendous. That being said, practice at what itis you're drawing and get better and I'm sure that in no time, your drawings/animations will be great. Don't take offence, I just want to help you guys out. Later, D21 out

I liked this at the start, but it got worse and worse as it progressed,

To zombie phill: Although your madness characters were well drawn, it didn't really go well with the music, it seemed to play a little slow, you should also try to find some sound effects for the guns/punches, it can make a huge diffrence. Score 4/10

To MarioMan360: Your movie had a really good frame rate and sound/music quality. But I didn't exactly find your punch line very funny try to improve on that if you can . Score 6/10

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2.65 / 5.00