mmm
kind of wierd
Author Comments
Well... this is it. I've been working on this for a while now, adding up to about 30 hours. It's my second animation, so my main purpose was just to get a feel for flash and learn some techniques.
Now, the actual "plot" is flat out retarded, and I'm starting to question whether or not I was sober when I drew it out... So for those of you who aren't fans of the stupidity or are intrigued with my "fascination" of pickles- I honestly don't know what I was thinking, or why I didn't notice this while I was making it. But I'm still learning, so constructive criticism is welcomed... enjoy?
Odd, but in an entertaining way.
Looks like something you'd see in a children's book, it's just odd enough to appeal to their imagination.
That one English pickle
With the teeth. You're so wrong for that. Great use of music, some interesting style notes, and although it was clear you were experimenting with some of your backgrounds and angles, it was enjoyable to watch too. Great job, let alone for a second try.
In terms of criticism, all I can say is: maybe some way of smoothing out the sound track, particularly the voices, would add a lot, make your flashes more professional, if that's what you want.
Relatable
Everyone knows that they've had this daydream.
hey good work
For your second flash, this is pretty good. Yea the story was pretty retarted(lol) but it was entertaining nevertheless. Um that little purple guy was kinda funny...the one with a high pitched voice, and sad to say it, kinda cute. His vision of pickle heaven is surely ambitious, and i feel bad for the little guy in the end when his pickle is eaten.
Anyways, i enjoyed it and hopefully you'll be making more stuff. Good luck