a cool little short with nice FBF work - specially

Disgusting! And I'm eating breakfast!

I loved how the men became more complex - stickmen, then the filled-in-shape man. I was kinda hoping for a 3rd man but ah well. Better to keep folk wanting more than bore 'em.

I wasn't too keen on the fact that the larger guy's foot is really detailed when we first see it, but it doesn't match the full view of him. I think just using an outlined shape (like he actually is) may have helped reduce a bit of incongruity.

Anyway, a cool little short with nice FBF work - specially on the spew!

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^^Good Points^^
Follows in the randomness of "shared joy is double joy", which is something hard to live up to. You've got the same very smooth FBF animations in this with the same random ideas in the movie. Definitely interesting sound effects and music to spice this up a bit as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just a bit short if you ask me. Also, it doesn't really have that random "funny" to it that your other random short had. Still, great job!

Excellent

I liked it, short sweet & to the point. Perfect.
Animation was excellent, the sound fitted in perfectly.
Only draw back is that I wanted to see more, but we can't always get what we want :P
Brilliantly funny too, great job

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Nice

+++:
Good music
Good animation
Good movings
Funny

---: it was a bit short

So very good job, real funny, but make it longer next time.

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Nice flash with good animation

Nice flash you made, I really enjoyed it, let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ The movements looked very human
+ The music fitted very well with the flash

Cons:
- The flash was short, this would have more potential if you made it longer

Overall:
Very nice flash you made with very vivid and good looking movements. Sadly it was very short, and made the viewer a bit disappointed because he expected much much more.

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