well done, but short
a little short, but aside from that, its okay.
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A Fighter class character ends up fighting an unexpected foe...
It is not very long, but enjoy!
Alright so this is my first ever decent flash project. I made it for school and as such it had to follow certain guidelines, so it's not exactly how I would have done it. Also, this was made at about February of 2007 I think...I have gotten much better at flash since then.
Edit: I should have mentioned this before, but I did the lip sync like that on purpose due to the sillyness of it. The spinning title thing was a last minute thing cuz' I needed a title. Also, like I mentioned, it was for a school project and one of the guidlines was to be I think about a minute long (including credits and titles). I appreciate the feedback though...and I do have more to put up, but I have to use the computers at my school, so at least one should be up within the next few days.
good
according to this is your first flash i would say that i liked it
if you would be a pro it wouldnt be this nice but lets be fair
its quiet short
and i didnt like those "rotating effects" at the beginning of your flash
but you ve got some nice smooth moving sprites and i liked the megaman X 5 intro song at the end
try to continue your efforts and you will become something great
Nice
Really fnny I would have liked more tho...
Not bad
You could probably make something good out of this if you made it longer.
heh, It was decent. But could use some work
Its Decent and being your first decent flash animation I can respect the effort and time that it took you to complete. But I would like to give you some advice for your next animation. When you are making lip syncs (they ARE very hard) But what I would advise you to do is the following. I saw that your mega man sprites lips poorly matched the words coming out. This may have been because the lips and the audio were NOT in a separate movie clip. Putting them inside their own movie clip helps you indicate when the audio appears especially when you make your own layer INSIDE the movie clip to put the audio inside of (You can see the sound waves move up and down through your time line and using this, you can move your mouth HIGHER when the audio waves jump higher and then move it LOWER for when the audio waves shoot lower.) This helps me for sprite lip syncing WHEN needed. It is a very big help and if you actually appreciate the advice but you still don't get it because of the way I worded it. PLEASE send me a message and I will do my best to re-explain basic lip-syncing that looks well done. It was good though keep it going, and I would like to see more flashes from you. KEEP EM COMING!
-Coolmaster730
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