well

it wasn't the best movie. it wasn't a great movie. but it was a good movie. i knid of enjoyed it. when you make your next flash i only have one real suggestion. when you create your loops that you repeatedly use. (such as the workers passing boxes back and forth out the truck) make sure that all the objects in the first and the last frame are in the same possition. for example the worker handing him the box. all of a sudden wrker one dissapears and starts walking a whole ten feet away with another box. to fix this you need to tack on a fragment at the end of the loop where he walks back towards the storehouse/factory. then when you see him start walking back out with another box, the flash has a smoother flow.

some of your other skill will have to come with time. one you might wish to look into is creating sybols, layers, onion skinning (i still don't know what that is), and motion tweening.

have a great day and keep it up!
-techtoast

wtf??

this vid is realy bad....

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Prrfftptptrrft... and that is what i think about this movie... total crap... nothing good at all as i can see...

Got my hand in my pants

Great character shows at early development. Any idiot can take a flash developing program and make total crap for all their videos, but you can do a good job. I cannot find the differences in this video between your last video. Other than a slight improvement on the animations and quality. The logo was very humorous and it was an original idea. When I say this I am truly sincere to you "if you keep on working at flash I think that you could be a great flash artist and probably get e-laid or something." Work on it and you will succeed. A well deserved 5/10.

I likes teh song so much...

You get a 5/5 10/10! I liked the movie, too, but I just really like the song :)